Your modifier is dangling...
Oct. 4th, 2013 11:50 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I walked past the large woman in the gurney, looking nervous and upset. Her hand was bandaged, but a large area was saturated with blood. I remembered her from the ER and wondered where her family was. They had all been with her downstairs.
POV Character is a radiologist/doctor, but she's not nervous, the patient is...
Not sure if it's permitted to post from published work, but that tends to be mostly what I read.
This is the latest book by someone who gained an audience with one of those horrible "romance" books that are booming at the moment. I decided to pick this one up, because it's about the apocalypse, but I really don't think I'll be making it through to the end.