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vassSome people join the army to defend their country and wear dress blues. They get naked pictures, cookies, and misspelled letters from grade-schoolers.
Nothing but a complete sentence restructure will stop the child pornography in your military's care packages.
Nothing but a complete sentence restructure will stop the child pornography in your military's care packages.
vass“From the time I started,” he says quietly, “nine-tenths of that office deserved what they had. And me? I was the one percent.”
(I'm tagging this as punctuation dysfunction on the grounds that it's a decimal point error.)
(I'm tagging this as punctuation dysfunction on the grounds that it's a decimal point error.)
Not in the pink of health
Dec. 12th, 2012 09:40 pmvass"Steve," Tony said sighing. Tony rubbed his eyes with one hand. "I know you ended up with the short end of the stick here and I'm sorry for that, but I-. My body need these. Some are for the pain. The blue one to make sure the reactor doesn't go rouge and my body doesn't start trying to nuke it.
Edited because Bruce started neighing: "Does anyone else find it odd that Tony has become the responsible one," asked Bruce his voice quiet and still horse from sleep.
Edited because Bruce started neighing: "Does anyone else find it odd that Tony has become the responsible one," asked Bruce his voice quiet and still horse from sleep.
That Odin, he's a real cut-up
Nov. 16th, 2012 02:47 pmvass"You will take all his power, you know their punishments will be sever, he is a war criminal"
Also: the title of this story is Acceptance of the Dammed, and I haven't gotten far enough to tell yet, but I suspect it isn't actually about hydro-mechanic engineering.
Also: the title of this story is Acceptance of the Dammed, and I haven't gotten far enough to tell yet, but I suspect it isn't actually about hydro-mechanic engineering.
It makes perfect sense
Oct. 15th, 2012 08:58 pmvassIn the end, as Tony's thumbs casually cling into the visible long curves of Ryan's thigh muscles, Steve thinks of a human caterpillar compromised of Nick Fury, Agent Hill and Loki.
Obviously, the author was, like most people, confused about whether to use 'comprised' or 'composed of', so they... compromised.
Obviously, the author was, like most people, confused about whether to use 'comprised' or 'composed of', so they... compromised.
