And I'm sure Jesus' butt looked great in that spandex

[vass]

Not talking, of course, not *interacting*, but standing there watching Steve walk under his own power, every muscle in his legs, his hips, his back flexing under clothes that apparently *were* issued at *just* that level of tightness and *only* for Steve Rogers and Jesus, Tony really needed to blow something up.

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[randomling]

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Just one comma would have saved that sentence

[baggyeyes]

Or a period, then a capital.

[randomling]

Yeah, that would have worked, too! (After I posted the comment, I thought, "actually that sentence could have done with being split into two", but then I didn't actually say that...)

[baggyeyes]

You should see some of my un-edited work. Ach. :)

[megaptera]

I can tell exactly what the author is trying to do here. It's supposed to be a hot-and-bothered runaway train of thought. ;) But yeah, restructure to keep the sentiment without introducing grammatical ambiguity. Italicize? That's what I'd probably do, just italicize everything from 'Jesus' onwards.